Saturday, 6 September 2014

War poem #2 - Eva

We fight in vain, We die in vain, We exist in vain.
We're living, breathing pawns, made to sacrifice.
We're prisoners to the system, Monkey say monkey do,
We're honorable because we do what we're told.
Honorable, honorable, honorable.
Honorable for murder,
honorable for obedience,
Honorable for doing or duty,  Our duty of death and destruction.

Honorable, Honorable, honorable.

2 comments:

  1. Well use of repetition there Eva. :D

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    1. I agree,
      but I also liked your structure

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