scar at the heart
You look down the blood infested trench
men with dead lifeless eyes
you fix your metal horn
your dance partner gives you a scowl and jumps at you like a bear
millions of metal teeth chewing at any thing it it can find
your home floods with red water
you see all people around you getting bitten
COUNTER ATTACK!!!!!
you jump over the wall
step over the the bodies
limbs everywhere
the man in front of you disappears into the brief flame
will you be next
you move forward into no mans land
you can hear the bangs of machine guns
and then the screams of innocent men dieing
something lands in front of you
GRENADE!!!
you throw it back it blows up
kills the enemy
you keep moving
more bodies
you fall into a wet ditch some on is there
he is alive and prey ing
he cries and runs off
you hear his scream
some one else comes in
it is one of yours
but his eyes are empty his face is empty
DEAD!!!
you look over the the ditch
mother has just hung the washing
but the cloths have been mixed up with the red
you feel the beat in your neck
you run
you shoot
you infultrate
BEHIND YOU!!!
he runs at you
you stab him
he dies
and more of your classmates arrive
you never forget this
it is a scar at the heart
by jack horsnell
Stanzas in the poem is really great. Great free verse poem Jack, loads of imagery, it makes the readers think, which I find really interesting. :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat construction with your words in the end and. I liked the story like poem you wrote as it was unique but still very powerful. I also liked you choice of vocab and the flow of the poem was good.
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