the poster says go
my mum says no
they say yes
now what is there to guess
the way may be brutal
but who will be crucial
to the never ending war
they have sores
from the “adventures” they had
they mend
they bend
the never ending war.thanks to hannah who helped a bit
this is a very good poem
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enjoyed reading it
-Jack
I really liked the rhyme and they way you portrayed the conflict not only with war but within your mind. The conflict of making decisions. Great Job.
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