My Heart Of Diamond
My heart burns like eternal fire
Forver lasting; tis my heart of diamond
Here on the treacherous land,
people come and go
If I die tonight,
I will show my faith and loyalty,
Here is my signal,
my heart of diamond will forever stay
No matter if my ashes hiss,
no matter if my soul shatters
I will always be there,
my heart of diamond
Awesome poem!!!! You are a great poem writer! I love how you repeated 'my heart'! So meaningful and emotional. Very awesome. :D
ReplyDeleteI like how you've used poetic language in this, your not just stating something, you're really thinking about the meaning of every word. Most people have written things against the war, so I liked that you've changed it a bit. :) good job!
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