Tuesday, 2 September 2014

Joyce W's Wilfred Owen poem :D

Lice

Tiny living creatures,
that give you mini lumps.
Lumps that are red and itchy.
When you are ready to fight,
you might get a bit twitchy.
The lice hidden in my shirt.
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  1. Anonymous8 September 2014 at 00:46

    Cool rhymes Joycew, :D

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  2. Catherine Palmer8 September 2014 at 03:35

    Effective, Joyce, I feel itchy already! I think you probably feel twitchy when you are not fighting, the battle would make you forget it.
    Have a play around with the structure to see what other effects you can get.

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