GAS!!! put your masks on
everyone else has got their leather masks on
I hold my breath
my eyes begin to burn
i search for my mask i cant find it
i cant hold my breath
i breathe out an in
my lunges begin to fill
i feel the blood coming up my throat
i vomit it out
i begin to fade
as i fall into the swirling darkness
death
by Jack Horsnell
Hi Jack! Cool poem, nice structure. :)
ReplyDeleteYou should try and add more interesting adjectives to spice the poem up, overall, it's good. :D
~ A.A Invisible Person123
thanks
Deleteso cool bro
ReplyDeletenice structure
10/10