War poem on hunger
My stomach growls at night,
A sign that it is suffering from hunger,
I’m putting up a fight,
But I have an urge to plunder,
And go away on war sight,
What keeps me in is thunder,
Of the bombshells,that’s right,
In the morning we heard “GO UNDER”,
We fought with all our might,
If I was to die with wonder,
I would say “Do not fight,stay out of sight.”
Great poem Thilini! :oD
ReplyDeleteLike the rhyme and the commas. You put a great use to the poem. :)
I really like the rhyme in this poem. I also like how you've ended it with a saying. It leaves you thinking.
ReplyDeleteGreat rhyming and awesome ending!!!!
ReplyDeleteNext time you should add more detailed words and keep re-crafting.
Cutting out words and adding stuff, you can use dictionary. Very helpful :D
Awesome work Thilini!!