Thursday, 28 August 2014


GAS!!! put your masks on
everyone else has got their leather masks on
I hold my breath
my eyes begin to burn
i search for my mask i cant find it
i cant hold my breath
i breathe out an in
my lunges begin to fill
i feel the blood coming up my throat
i vomit it out
i begin to fade
as i fall into the swirling darkness
death


by Jack Horsnell

3 comments:

  1. Hi Jack! Cool poem, nice structure. :)
    You should try and add more interesting adjectives to spice the poem up, overall, it's good. :D

    ~ A.A Invisible Person123

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  2. so cool bro
    nice structure
    10/10

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