The Weak
The tear tracks, down haggard faces
Drawn mouths, trembling hands
Is it so bad?
Understanding is a powerful thing.
Guns, Death
Rivulets of blood and spit
Making tracks, forming streams in the mud.
Sacrifice is a necessary thing.
How are we to defeat them,
Make them fall,
If we don't stumble too?
Estimation is a essential thing.
Sitting whilst others must move,
Orders, lists, drinks
Office of Death
Initiative is an important thing.
By Abby
that is a very good poem Abby I like the way it really created a picture in your mind.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Abby. Nice imagery, and the way you used the commas to create a pause... AMAZING! :D
ReplyDeleteI love your use of powerful Adjectives and metaphors. It really creates a powerful image in your mind. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery, I like how you structured your poem as well. Great work!!!
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ReplyDeleteEvery word feels like they're there for a purpose
I like how you used powerful words and you made great imagery
Awesome work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!